Sunday, July 31, 2011

Take a Look

So, the editor from Pure Slush has posted his first contribution to "travel month."

I won't give any opinion, because I want you to form your own.

3 comments:

  1. Before I look, I can confidently say it sucks, and the editor needs to have his stuff edited by an editor...

    Hey, for all you know, the editor is a 13 year-old kid.

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  2. Ok, I read it. It's ok. I'm not blown over, but I don't hate it, either. He sure likes italics. But then, a good editor doesn't need to be a good writer.

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  3. I felt it did not flow at all, I had a hard time finishing. It did not grab my interest anywhere. I did think it sucked.

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